Craig Norris

Member since January 27, 2009

Member for 17 years, 4 months

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my tangerine bubble and I

Posted May 23, 2010 · 14 lines · 2 critiques

My tangerine bubble and I
float eye to eye across the sky
over waterfalls and sunsets
and reasons why
beyond avarice and passion
and wanting to die
beyond whales and their backdrop
of stars in the sky
past storms that a mind
would surge in dark tides
to where the sun warms the shores
of an island beyond
and the past and the future
are melded as one.

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January 2024
26 Fri

Anniversary
15 years of membership
January 2019
26 Sat

Anniversary
10 years of membership
January 2014
26 Sun

Anniversary
5 years of membership
May 2010
24 Mon

Received a critique
on the distance to the door from @loved
"The door...is all in ones mind When u want to come over They say the door of opportunity Is wide open today As twas yesterday Come right away loved and lovely"
23 Sun

Received a critique
on my tangerine bubble and I from @Kailashana
"Good poem. Imo, please omit the last "my tangerine bubble and I." It's too good a poem to sound childish. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisar…"
23 Sun

Posted a poem
my tangerine bubble and I
"My tangerine bubble and I"
Open thread 14 lines
April 2010
23 Fri

Received a critique
on the distance to the door from @Worldwide Freeride
"Hi Craig! This an intriguing write indeed with simile and metaphor taking a key grasp in expressing your raw emotions and thoughts. You seem to be reminiscing and yet haunting yourself with those memories, somehow cling…"
23 Fri

Posted a poem
the distance to the door
"In these vague unkempt days"
Open thread 20 lines
17 Sat

Posted a poem
saving Buddha from an auction house
"The Prince is rescued"
Open thread 30 lines
January 2010
26 Tue

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2009
16 Tue

Most-discussed work
whisper

39 critiques to date.
May 2009
15 Fri

Highest posting month
May 2009 — 13 poems
January 2009
27 Tue

First critique offered
on "Waking up" by @Ink Dragon
27 Tue

First publication
For You.. (since unpublished)
26 Mon

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.