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Jun 11, 2007
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Hooks
I gaze into the abyss
I suspect many do
the idea of falling is terrorising and tempting
but I can’t
love has hooks in my flesh
holds me above the abyss
— weirdelf, Jun 11, 2007
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weirdelf
19 years ago
LOL
stardream
18 years 11 months ago
hooks
IKnowNoBox
18 years 9 months ago
I know of a human puppet...
rider68
18 years 1 month ago
Very Deep
orgami
18 years 1 month ago
painless steal
weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
Thanks Peter and O.
Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 1 month ago
Oh and we are so Blessed by those hooks or cursed
rider68
18 years 1 month ago
I couldn't let this slip by,
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