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weirdelf
weirdelf
Jun 12, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

My house

I love my little house
I creep back here like a mouse
when life is hard
But mostly I exalt
in its encompassing gestalt
 of love

— weirdelf, Jun 12, 2007

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Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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Conect11

19 years ago

actually

I dig this. I was taken back at first by the rhyme, but then I read the first two lines as a "flow" with an abrupt stop at "hard." This is short and simple, and therein lies its power, a poem about ones house should be short, simple, and above all, humble, which this is. The only knock I have is a need for punctuation. Mark

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