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Jun 14, 2007
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The Suit
Once I saw a man in a suit knocked down by a car
He went rolling along the road,
one shoe went off in another direction.
He rolled into a sitting position,
he had a small package in his hand.
He raised it to his ear and shook it.
Then he said fuckit
and fell over and didn’t move any more.
So sue me,
I laughed.
— weirdelf, Jun 14, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 12 months ago
thanks guys
Conect11
19 years ago
descriptive
orgami
18 years 10 months ago
hit and run
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