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Mistyone

Jun 15, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Lie To Me

Lie to me pain
so I have to feel
lie to me love
so I have to stain
lie to me lies
so I won’t know my pain
lie to me lies
so I won’t have to stain

— Mistyone, Jun 15, 2007

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18 years 12 months ago

This is dirty, nasty and good

I thought at first the first line was a mis-spelling "Lie to my pain" then I realised not. You are bone bruisingly honest. Few people can be so.

18 years 12 months ago

I am posting a lot tonight

In aussie, and my mouth tastes of wormwood, but thats no need to disregard.

C

18 years 12 months ago

wormwood?

as in absinthe? You bastard!

18 years 12 months ago

yeay, absinthe, it's legal here

but much over-rated. It's just a more mellow and... cognicent way of being drunk. Not hallucinogenic at all. Take it from me, I am an expert. The only reason my brain is not totally fried is that I have always taken vitamin supplements and looked after my diet.

C

18 years 12 months ago

ooh

illegal here, I did almost move to Sydney a few years back, now I know why, lol.

18 years 12 months ago

hey dude

don't let the wormwood dialogue take away from your poem. it's just the chat room hasn't started yet.

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