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Jul 07, 2007
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Not many people have read John Lennons poetry, here is one
I Sat Belonely
I sat belonely down a tree,
humbled fat and small.
A little lady sing to me
I couldn’t see at all.
I’m looking up and at the sky,
to find such wonderous voice.
Puzzly, puzzle, wonder why,
I hear but I have no choice.
‘Speak up, come forth, you ravel me’,
I potty menthol shout.
‘I know you hiddy by this tree’.
But still she won’t come out.
Such sofly singing lulled me sleep,
an hour or two or so
I wakeny slow and took a peep
and still no lady show.
Then suddy on a little twig
I thought I see a sight,
A tiny little tiny pig,
that sing with all it’s might
‘I thought you were a lady’,
I giggle, - well I may,
To my surprise the lady,
got up - and flew away.
— weirdelf, Jul 07, 2007
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Rottiestyl
18 years 11 months ago
He was a
SAKTHEEE2007
18 years 11 months ago
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barbsdad2003
18 years 11 months ago
So Strange ...
weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
I just thought you'd like it
barbsdad2003
18 years 11 months ago
Oh, I Do!
jacks
18 years 8 months ago
I’ve never seen this,
IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
A man an artist...etc. etc.
RSScheerer
18 years ago
Lennon
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