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Lenny of Cohen
Jul 08, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Medication Please!

cracks appear in my skin.

tell tale signs of my addiction

to the all conquering sun bed.

secular radiation creeping in

door opens and in steps cancer man,

glad of his careless host.

 

(c)2007.8.7 Lenny of Chen

— Lenny of Cohen, Jul 08, 2007

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Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

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the most coherent of your already fine work. I never tan, I just burn... badly... quickly. I love this little word picture. It is most crispy! Mark W.

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