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Rottiestyl
Rottiestyl
Jul 21, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

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— Rottiestyl, Jul 21, 2007

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Region, Country: USA - Illinois, USA

Favorite Poets: Shakespeare, Emily Dickinson, Edgar Allen Poe

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Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

I think

this poem is tender and human. I think the centering is fine, mainly because of the (unintended?) teardrop shape it evokes. Kim, I love "green is a color for vegetables" and "don't trip over your envy," both of which I think I and everyone could relate with. Hope all is well for you. Glad to see you back. Mark
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

funny Mark

the shape reminds me of a bomb dropping. I am sure Mr. Rorschach would be amused. cheers, Jess

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