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Jul 27, 2007
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Breathless
Give me several million hours
and I wouldn’t have a clue,
how to write down in that time
all I love about you.
Give me a rainbow of colors
and bring the paint by the cart,
and there wouldn’t be enough paint
to capture the love in my heart.
Take all the angel’s voices
singing out in unison,
and the song would be for you
and would never be quite done.
For if you give me one look
or one smile, or a glance,
that’s all it takes for my heart
to flourish and to dance!
For you are the catalyst of my soul-what can I say?
You’re my reason for breathing
yet, you take my breath away.
— docmaverick, Jul 27, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
for all the bilions
purplemoondoll
18 years 10 months ago
Left me breathless
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