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Jul 31, 2007
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Addict #2
I perceive the darkness
of your barren soul
it lurks on the dancefloor
hoping for a dance
I hold your
broken dreams
in my arms
and give you
first aid from my heart,
your head is bowed
as if in contemplation;
are you wondering
is a price to pay
can love
come without a cost.
I photograph your tears
cascading down your cheeks
each one
representing
an abusive encounter.
I wonder
how you
can muster up the strength
to fight another day.
Maybe you’ve
become
accustomed to violence
and are now an addict.
Lenny Gazbowski (c) 2007.01.08
— Lenny of Cohen, Jul 31, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
definitely an improvement
HDGoodman
18 years 10 months ago
rent boy.
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