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Aug 02, 2007
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The Bus Ride
I was riding the bus
it seemed like for hours,
when I noticed an older man
and he was holding some flowers.
I kept admiring them
now and again,
when he suddenly came over
and said, "Excuse me, friend…
I noticed you looking
at the flowers, and me,
and I think that my wife
would like you to have them, you see.
I’ll simply explain
that I gave them away,
to a nice stranger I met
on my bus ride, today."
Well, I thanked him, and watched him
exit the bus all alone,
and walk into a small cemetery
and kneel at a lone headstone.
— docmaverick, Aug 02, 2007
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Critiques
Prototype
18 years 10 months ago
Well, well
poet_inside
18 years 10 months ago
Poetic indeed, this was a
A. M. Painter
18 years 10 months ago
Hm
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
very affective story,
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