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Aug 17, 2007
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Nothing
Blocked
obliterated
torn up
I
have to fell something
fall away baby
and stay
covered up
in me
scream
and bleed
subtley.
Breathe
mmmmm…
stain me
cover me
she
is in
for nothing,
and me.
I seep
and weep the bondage
is clean.
So please,
cut me deeply.
Bleed,
serenade me
see
believe in me.
— Conect11, Aug 17, 2007
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I get the raw emotion
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