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Unseen damage
Unseen damage
A feeling created by one who seeks to destroy
one who obliterates all thoughts of peace and joy
once who was constantly there, smothering all freedom
one who thinks all success should remain a part of his so called kingdom
you should not have yielded so much power
yet with one spoken word, you did
the effects of your abusive utterances, far reaching
the damage cause thereby, permanent, not easily healed
for those you have hurt, the wounds run deep
for those you have damaged, they no longer sleep
the calm, healing sleep, that others seem to be entitled to
for those you have hurt, have had all their rights stripped away by you
you plead innocence, you claim no harm was meant
you shout out injustices that you seem to think others have shown to you
but what about all those you have hurt?
those lost, forgotten souls, you should now atone to?
they are left, faceless in their plight
hidden from the world and all plain sight
they are once again like a small child, constantly wanting, needing
it is your approval they are craving, wanting and seeking
upon these poor unfortunate soiled souls you have left your mark
a mark as clear and as brutally harsh as it is stark
will they ever be able to once again seize control of their destinies
or will they be forever left your victims, destroyed by your self centered convictions?
Critiques
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
Feebie, a few of your poems
Jillian Botha
18 years 8 months ago
Hi Jess
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
it makes a lot of sense
Jillian Botha
18 years 8 months ago
BLUSHING!!!!
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