Birds of Prey

Falcon in the sky

airial acrobatics

breath taking instinct

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 01, 2007

About the Author

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

Critiques

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

there are several

syllable based forms, mostly Japanese, sijo is another. Also worth looking at are the traditional Scandinavian poems that are purely alliterative. cheers, Jess

IKnowNoBox

18 years 9 months ago

alliterative,I gotta go buy

alliterative,I gotta go buy a dictionary?I,m out of here you and your high fallutin' words. Good one, Dabbler

weirdelf

18 years 9 months ago

smile, yes buy a good dictionary,

the Oxford is still the best. But there are several free dictionaries online too. cheers, Jess

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