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Tit for Tat

Thinking

       Sinking

Succumbing

       Becoming

Lying

       Dying

Explore

        Implore

Hope

        Cope

— Frost Smith, Sep 05, 2007

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Frost Smith

Frost Smith

18 years 9 months ago

HUH?

HUH? , don't understand your comment.
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RandomThoughts

18 years 8 months ago

LOve it!

Just loved it. Sweet word play!
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

tres cool,

reminds me of something I tried to do a while ago but yours is better. cheers, Jess

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