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Hope

 

 

 

Hope is hard to write about

Despair has so much more clout

Happiness isn’t something I can tout

But frustration I can really spout

Peace always seems to be in doubt

When I sit in terror night in and night out

Worthlessness pains me like a bad case of gout

On my pity pot all I want to do is pout

Understanding begins to sprout

Before bewilderment is the bear and I am a trout

 

— Frost Smith, Sep 07, 2007

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Mark

Mark

18 years 9 months ago

Frost Yes!

I just love this poem :-) Hope it seems comes into existance on it's own in my humble opinion. Hope seems to keep choice and creativity from self destruction. Hope is kind of like a hug. Truly, Mark
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

Fucking awesome!

Oh man, it is so easy to miss gems on this site, especially when people flood, may they be nailed to a tree by their genitals. Glad I have assigned myself the role of trawling the backwaters, although I am missing the latest goss. 8) cheers, Jess
TP

The Lost Poet

18 years 3 months ago

Rhyme is used very well

Rhyme is used very well throughout, love it.Get the feeling of happiness when i read it.Congrats on another great piece

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