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IKnowNoBox

Sep 10, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Tundra(haiku)

A barren tundra

far far away from it all

there is nothing here

— IKnowNoBox, Sep 10, 2007

About the Author

Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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C

18 years 9 months ago

I love

the thought of barren tundra. It is still a dream to visit Antarctica someday. A beautiful haiku, Box! Mark W.

I

18 years 8 months ago

I thank the Weird...

He toughed me up to the definition Iknow he told me true because there's a struggle in it for me now I do have a source on the table with some of the old hats,thats the value of critique to me it helps me take apart the engine and throw in the stuff that makes it run.Any body can feel" Ok"about themselves,but a person who knows their friends will tell them when they are not, are confident people. In Ink, Nobox

18 years 8 months ago

this is a bloody perfect haiku!

using the imagery of nature to allegorise inner desolation. Bloody brilliant! cheers, Jess

I

18 years 8 months ago

thanks to you jess

I may reach something here . in ink, David

18 years 8 months ago

Okay...

I love it. Wolfy.

I

18 years 8 months ago

From here I started my Journey

To where? The Horizon and Beyond. Thank you Cat. In ink, David

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dbrock

18 years 7 months ago

Oh, I see how it’s done

Oh, I see how it's done ...now I might do better :) Lovely read! donna

I

18 years 7 months ago

I look forward to it.

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