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Fatherhood Haiku

Fatherhood Haiku

There is no fear in
becoming a new father.
But in being one.

— Conect11, Sep 10, 2007

Critiques

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 9 months ago

Not a father myself...

thanks for the affirmation. What animal in the kingdom is the finest example of a father?That is the question I ask. In Ink, IKNB
Mark

Mark

18 years 9 months ago

A good question

but I love this untraditional or is it? Are we not a part of nature? Are we not born, grow, raise children, grow old, and die? Is not this meaning of life found elsewhere - in nature? Nice Nice Mark and I certainly can relate to the philosophy here. Thanks, Mark L
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Quillsvein1

18 years 9 months ago

you

successfully communicate to those who have never had children the fear, responsibility, and joy therein in your poems; that's quite a feat. i've read innumerable saccharine, sentimental poems that eulogize the experience as nothing but pure pink balloon cotton candy joy without including the element of responsibility. nice job.
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barbsdad2003

18 years 9 months ago

Oh, Yeah

I suspect that belated fearfulness is an improvement over never. Thanx for a succinct read. Yours, Chuck
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

Not a father either

just the cool and bad example uncle. But sheesh, you gotta have a license to drive a car but any arsehole can impregnate. Well said. cheers, Jess
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Conect11

18 years 8 months ago

and

there are many that do. Mark W.

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