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Conect11
Sep 13, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Ironic Epigram for Smokers


Ohio passed a law
banning indoor smoking.
So now all the clean air
is inside…
with the asbestos!

— Conect11, Sep 13, 2007
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Mark

Mark

18 years 9 months ago

They should ban

being sick in hospitals too many people get sick there. NH bans next and I think they will outlaw bad breath after - it is offensive :-) Ever listen to ZLX? What is that talk anyway? Man, OK - end note: there are more questions here than lines lmao

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