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Sep 17, 2007
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Prison
my mind
is my
prison cell
furnished
by my family
who watch
as I crash
and fail
with the ease of
an ageing professional
they adore
my beautiful failure
and capture
my efforts
on film
knowing it
will make
for great family
entertainment
(C)Lenny of Cohen
19.9.07
— Lenny of Cohen, Sep 17, 2007
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