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Prison

my mind
is my
prison cell

furnished
by my family

who watch
as I crash
and fail

with the ease of
an ageing professional

they adore
my beautiful failure

and capture
my efforts
on film

knowing it
will make
for great family
entertainment

(C)Lenny of Cohen
19.9.07

— Lenny of Cohen, Sep 17, 2007

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18 years 9 months ago

OK

Oh thankgod for family

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