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Conect11
Oct 03, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Nymphomaniac Haiku

 All the girls I know are sweet nymphomaniacs till we go to bed.
— Conect11, Oct 03, 2007
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Sex,the dance of Kama Sutra

and talk of teases too. I am reminded why ,I am into Muses and not,Play mates. Well done Mark. Wishes of healing for your Migraines!
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Conect11

18 years 8 months ago

ah muses

are dangerous things, and the line often becomes blurry between inspiration and love. Mark W.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

True and so I have....

Belle Morte's Rose,Mark she is the scent of coping,while in morning,my Belle be my Wringer of tears. I have crushed a muse and I will never do so again. Pillow Talk, without the sweating,and exertion.Priceless. In ink, David To say to a woman,"I love to be with you." Instead of "I love you."with her knowing what you mean. Priceless Something all the points on neopoet couldn't buy!
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weirdelf

18 years 8 months ago

As I said

ROFL, bitter true, except maybe one or two who taught me a thing or three about loving making being god thee and me love making is at least a threesome, depending on how many loving gods you care to include. cheers, Jess
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

Jess,

I have heard Kaulas are real Don' Juans',any truth to that? Curiously, Dabbler
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Quillsvein1

18 years 8 months ago

Haha

damn right, "until we go to bed"! the female psyche is gorgeous but sometimes impenetrable in these matters. see a movie called "black snake moan" if you ever get the chance, it addresses something like this wonderfully. great, clever haiku!

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