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Ink Dragon
Oct 11, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

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Ponder on the mechanism


I'm in the process of submitting poems to magazines and therefore deleting them. They may be up again later.


— Ink Dragon, Oct 11, 2007
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RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 8 months ago

Paper Wings

We all have them. Despite our best efforts, they even get singed from time to time. Very clever write, Ink. love, rs
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 8 months ago

My paper wings are coffee stained and crumbled

with notes sqribbled willy nilly about them,and I only wear them when I am alone.I plan on recycling them. ID you hint to a project.I had suspected this.I am baited. In crayon drawn thought bubble, No Box
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Grazzii2

18 years 8 months ago

Ikarus 2007

Nifty … in a few words you’ve out done the Greeks in description A well done effort
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leonard daranjo

17 years 5 months ago

Nice Theme

Lovely little poem, nice message. I love the myth Take care ... Leonard
Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 5 months ago

ID,

I find it interesting that even reaching perfection you can get burned, must be careful not to think to highly of ourselves even when we rid ourselves of our flaws. This reminded me of Atlantis, a people who thought to highly of themselves and fell to there own devises. For me this is great poetry: fantasy that becomes the truth in philosophy. Congrats on evolution!! Eddie
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Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

Thanks, Eddie,

wow! Who´d have thought this would be getting so many comments? Fantasy that becomes the truth in philosophy... I am flattered, Ink
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Ink Dragon

16 years 10 months ago

Too bad for Ikarus,

you make me laugh, Kelsey. Thanks for the read and the comment. I am busying myself with revisiting my old posts and sometimes I discover new possibilities along the way... Much love, ~Nina
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orgami

16 years 10 months ago

fly too near the Gods

and they will pluck your wings off and send you packing Straight down great take on a classic Love it
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Ink Dragon

16 years 10 months ago

Big O,

you did quite a great take on it yourself in your comment. Love your comments, they are so often poems in their own right. Thanks, ~Nina

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