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Ink Dragon
Oct 24, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

seasonal changing of the guards

 

Seasonal changing of the guards

 

autumn wakes and shakes

his golden head, summer sleeps,

winter yawns and stirs

— Ink Dragon, Oct 24, 2007
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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 7 months ago

I works,

but to be nicky-picky, haikus don't personify nature. The evocation of nature provides a human allegory. cheers, Jess
ID

Ink Dragon

18 years 7 months ago

Yeah

I kind of stretched the point here, I know. But it was the very first one, and I am still very fond of it...Thanks, ID

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