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The Beginning and the End

     The scent is familiar, yet it lends towards wonderment.

The aroma's faint enough to make you concentrate,

yet strong enough to remind you-and make you smile.

So delicate, is this melody.....it'll haunt your dreams,

weaving the tune in and out of your memory.

Satiating your hunger for a necter so sweet;

yet leaving the tastebuds of your soul,

yearning for a flavor never experienced...

..a past experience, never felt...

..and a feeling, both so familiar it is your friend...

..yet so unknown, it is but a stranger to you.

     Happiness is it's theme, and sadness is it's nemesis;

and more often than not, it's the other way around.

It has caused battles to ensue,

and ended wars-in an instance.

Depending on the variables, it can be an enemy-or a friend...

..taken-or given...

..near-or distant...

..granted-or denied...

..or a blessing-or a curse.

It can be all of these things.....because collectively, and separately...

..all of these things are "it".

It is the beginning... and the end.....

..for it is love.

— docmaverick, Nov 22, 2007

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Mark

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

Ahhh YUP !

it is a great experience reading your lines Doc! And this is so true of love and it's power. Probably most true in regards to being in love. This love was certainly my reason to live and near destroyed me and me my community as well. Nasty, it can be real nasty. It is a real pleasure Doc you write at my speed. Thanks, Mark
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 6 months ago

Doc, have really loved your latest poems

you are speaking truthfully as a poet, not rhyming like an entertainer. the feeling comes through. The last line was un-necessary, the rest of the poem let us know what you were talking about. cheers, Jess
Mark

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

Not sure about that

from the Happiness line on down I was wondering if this was about power and was kind of glad that line was there. Needed it spelled out I guess.
docmaverick

docmaverick

18 years 6 months ago

I appreciated,

your comments, Mark. I have many miles to go, but I'm starting to get a "feel" for the freeform. Used to piss off Jess with my "sing-songy" approach to "da verse". later, Doc.
Mark

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

Don't feel bad

I think I still pssi hmi off wthi my sellpngi lmao Mrak
Mark

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

What a world it

must be. Is there alot good in it? I suppose I am asking curse or blessing or a bit of both. Mark

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