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Nov 23, 2007
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Bring it Down
Bring it down a notch
Not a wild dive ...
Managable spiral Please!
if there is so much as one
surprise here things are
going to get harder
to hold together
we have no time
to cheer right now
Put Down the bull horn
Speak sternly and
you will be heard
if what you say
is received and agreed
then open a forum
for those that wish
to comment
Slow down a bit
pace your self to condition
muscles and energy
for the long road ahead
a chance to watch
the scenery that is
along the way
— IKnowNoBox, Nov 23, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 6 months ago
Some, probably most, do it tough a lot
IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
Thank you Jess
dbrock
18 years 6 months ago
…so funny that i would
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