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Gratuitously Graphic Gore
Heads fly!
disfigured fowl flutter about
with patchwork mask we
run the show most morbid
threaten the theater owner
with a death witnessed by
his next of kin if he lowers
the curtain on our act that
will be the last show he
cancels
Crescendo of screams!
viewers should not act like
they didn't know what to expect
as the puke that they spew
is served back to them as
the gravy for gut spaghetti
real fun for the entire family
so don't act like you don't
like it surly you will get
your moneys worth of YUCK!
in a creepy kind of way
it's excitement !
Scarred Flesh!
ripped open to expose rot
every body keeps their
eyes open of course
they all read the ticket
watch the show or else your
next of kin will be in
the sequel to follow
will be a scary family film
as long as there are
acts of gratuitous
visceral entertainment
we will have audience
to torture mayham
and gore
(keep your ticket it is a matinee!)
Critiques
Calliope
18 years 6 months ago
Always...
musicguru
18 years 6 months ago
really liked it
Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 6 months ago
I love the early shows
IKnowNoBox
18 years 6 months ago
B-Rate slaughters
meic
18 years 5 months ago
Only you could successfully
weirdelf
18 years 5 months ago
You are a cunning bastard!
IKnowNoBox
18 years 5 months ago
when I write poems I am more lucid?
weirdelf
18 years 5 months ago
I will help, in Private mesage
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