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Dec 02, 2007
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Foods of Mass Destruction & A Loss of Identity
I never knew myself that well
even my shadow was evasive
AND
going back even further
to when I was being spoilt rotten
in my mother's womb
WELL
I still have trouble remembering who I was
I mean, I knew I was there
but as to my identity
I have no idea
The womb THOUGH
was such a wonderful place
and if someone could design
a fast food outlet based
on the perfection of the womb
I am sure it would be a huge success
AND
while I am talking
666 fast food outlets
LETS BOMB MACDONALDS
and STARBUCKS
AMEN and mines a mineral water
from the face of the planet
— Lenny of Cohen, Dec 02, 2007
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weirdelf
18 years 6 months ago
Love this Lenny!
Lenny of Cohen
18 years 6 months ago
Cheers
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