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Published in my poetry anthology Soapbox Trophies. Release date TBA. Thanks for all your support! :)

— theladyblue, Dec 08, 2007

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Country/Region: USA

Critiques

meic

18 years 6 months ago

I imagine I’m no different

I imagine I'm no different to anyone who reads this gorgeous love poem: I felt welcomed in, warmed and cherished. Vicarious though this pleasure might be, you'll just have to forgive those of us who shared the joy. Mike

theladyblue

18 years 5 months ago

thanks so much!!!

i like that you are just as mushy as i am, though i dont consider myself quite that mushy...guess im wrong hehe "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie

orgami

16 years 9 months ago

Backtrack

mushy?? I remember the velour seats of the Oldsmobile a freind used to allow me to occasionally drive Lush a word so overused but so for me describes this poetry you write I remember sleeping once on my cheap matress on the floor So poor and then an oppurtunity on a three thousand dollar matress is there a difference??? Ohh yes indeed I can feel it in your words as I read them oo phone ringing must answer..

Bonitaj

16 years 9 months ago

Hello Lady Blue

Your mood is "anything but" in this piece. Erotic, sensuous and beguiling! Good write! Bonita j

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