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Lenny of Cohen
Dec 12, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Erotic Indulgence

I come alive

when you let me inside

your sweet pink palace

 

                                                                                               Lenny of Cohen(C)2007

— Lenny of Cohen, Dec 12, 2007

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Country/Region: GBR

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Mark

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

I love pink

I just don't wear it lmao Mark L a point among infinite points in the circle am I
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 6 months ago

The only way I could think of

to make this a more perfect short poem was to structure it centred so that it formed an inverted triangle. I played around in Word but failed. Guess it's perfect enough as it is. cheers, Jess wishing you a Salubrious Solstice
Mark

Mark

18 years 6 months ago

Baldly?

OH lmfao I just got it !

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