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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Mar 24, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Lonely Trekking

Lonely journey, I have no confidant I find myself running on want Traveling this road all alone Though unfair, I’m in a zone Lonely eyes, I see no sunshine Our love I left in the pines Like a kite in the night Sadness took away my might Lonely days, I sit by your grave Remembering the life, we once shared Wondering where we’d be today If that tragic moments never came
— Barbara Writes, Mar 24, 2008

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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purplemoondoll

18 years 2 months ago

Sweet, sad and lyrical. I

Sweet, sad and lyrical. I just spotted one line that night need correcting and that is the last one? If that tragic moments? Or should that read moment? Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years 2 months ago

thank you

Barbara Writes you are so right another typo. I will fix it. Really appreciate your eye for detail.

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