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Mar 24, 2008
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Cotton Wool
Looking out the window
I can see him below
Little Jimmy, sporting
His brand new bright
Cotton wool coat.
And there beside him
Is little sister Lucy
Playing with the buttons
On her bubble wrap dress.
While mother watches.
She stands not three feet
Behind them both with
What looks like two harnesses
In hand. Pink one and blue
no one is left out.
Then there's a sudden commotion.
No time to harness up
And all three run inside
With a shriek, they lock the door.
And now below, a happy bee
Buzzes about his business,
Unaware of the trauma
He has caused.
— Kieran Nelson, Mar 24, 2008
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Barbara Writes
18 years 2 months ago
took me back
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18 years 2 months ago
rumble of the stumble
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