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Come play this old piano
“I am that old piano…”
You know the one I mean,
That’s propped up pints
On raucous nights…
A drunken, ribald scene.
Some found the keys
Beneath my lid
Would play a tune or two,
But there were always other bars
That had a better view.
Those tuneless bellows,
tortured chords
And hands like hammer blows.
“Yes, even old pianos hurt,
But nothing ever shows.”
Some understanding
Would be nice,
But that’s a different song,
No heavy-handed thumper
Could make me play along.
My pedals marked
By hobnail boots,
My ivories cracked and brown,
But I give more in one small note
Than anyone in town.
So grace my corner
With your chair
And play me if you must,
It’s better than a silent grave
gathering worms and dust.
Play honky-tonk,
Or jazz or blues,
Beat your rhythm on the floor,
Spill your beer, and ash and spit
And stagger out the door.
“Do pianos dream?”,
I hear you ask,
Of fingers soft and sweet;
Of Siren sounds and ruby lips
And stockinged, dancing feet?
Such hands once found me
all alone,
A smile caressed my keys,
None had ever touched me so,
Voice floating like a breeze.
But she mistook me
For her love,
My chords soon to neglect,
She’d played my deepest feelings
Though only danced respect.
And every night
at opening time
I search for her in vain
Amongst a throng of faces
Who cannot know my pain.
So tonight come play
This old piano,
Before you drink too much,
He’s lost more than you’d ever know,
Please remind him of her touch.
Critiques
poewriter58
18 years 2 months ago
Keith
Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
Keith
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Ladies
Essi.Daven
18 years 2 months ago
***
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Playing
rider68
18 years 2 months ago
A Great Incarnation Of Yesterdays
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Stroking Joannas
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Rachmaninov
abrelosojos
18 years 2 months ago
my favorite line “Do
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Pianos both touched and played
Barbara Writes
18 years 2 months ago
Really good
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Ah, if pianos could but talk....
purplemoondoll
18 years 2 months ago
We just threw out an old
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Shame on you Kaz
gwizardstar
18 years 2 months ago
Nice
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Play along then....
Mark
18 years 2 months ago
It Got Rhythm
professor
18 years 2 months ago
So make a recording for me....
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Words that make you weep
Ancientone
18 years 2 months ago
Like Piano Roll Blues!
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Rhythm
Ancientone
18 years 2 months ago
It's your poem....
weirdelf
18 years 2 months ago
this was so awesome I had to go away awhile and think/feel
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Private lives
LadyTheresa
56 years 5 months ago
Beautiful !
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Poignant
cricket
18 years 2 months ago
I feel many things
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Such a sensitive and perceptive review
Alobar
18 years 2 months ago
When we sold my mother’s
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Written to be played
tbeaudet
18 years 2 months ago
WOW
tbeaudet
18 years 2 months ago
One more thing
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Cryting out for a song
Kailashana
18 years 2 months ago
Perhaps the Piano man can
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Billy Joel
Calliope
18 years 2 months ago
This had A....
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Its never too late Lacy
Patricia_legacy
18 years 2 months ago
Loved it
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Simplicity
fthillsboomer
18 years 2 months ago
Great Poem and Story
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Baseball
Kailashana
18 years 2 months ago
Actually Keith, since
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Ah its rugby now
Janice Pearce
18 years 2 months ago
Prof
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Thanks Janice
IRENE
17 years 2 months ago
Come play this old piano
professor
17 years 2 months ago
My pleasure Irene
Atticus
17 years 2 months ago
Still finely tuned
professor
17 years 2 months ago
I am honoured by such praise
faerybeki
17 years 2 months ago
This is a beautiful write,
professor
17 years 2 months ago
Thankyou Beki
W.C.Wampler
17 years 2 months ago
Play this old piano poem/ comment
professor
17 years 2 months ago
Thanks WCW
Seren
17 years 2 months ago
loved it
professor
17 years 2 months ago
Oh i am sure you can
Seren
17 years 2 months ago
Im trying
professor
17 years 2 months ago
I am sure with your ear
Cloudthings
17 years 2 months ago
BRAVO!
professor
17 years 2 months ago
Thanks so much
Kailashana
17 years 2 months ago
Come play me, your fingers
professor
17 years 2 months ago
Play it again Anna! lol
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