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IKnowNoBox
Apr 13, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Poo Party Inc.


there was laughter by the hand full
cheer overflowed from hor' derve trays
chalices topped off with vintage kudos
vaudeville performances of  things
entice guest from stuffy comfy zones
sly buzz word loaded soliloquies
quips,slang,and emotional venting
vats of resentment brew
for guest unable to shoo
When expected
— IKnowNoBox, Apr 13, 2008

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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IKnowNoBox

18 years 2 months ago

A party thrown after a camping trip

will not fly very far,and will usually land on those that did not attend said camping trip.The fact that I house sat while they where away kind of sealed me in... had i been thinking critically I would have passed. In ink, dabbler
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 2 months ago

Hello

Was this a lost weekend? I am very curious as to how the washing machine died. Was it a natural death or was it murdered? Always, Cat
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 2 months ago

Well we are looking at neglagenct homicide

a load of camping supplies in the area is in the lab.The after trip party was stuffy because they just got back from a badly planned trip. If they had waited one day to decompress it would have been a wind-dig.One person wanted it early,one pushy person who had money for supplies,thus the implied use of the washer.That now only goes Wahhirrrrrr Wahirrrrrrrr then clicks off,Heavy cord missing from a ruck sack is suspicion of strangulation.This begs for a part two. In ink, dabbler

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