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May 12, 2008
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I have sat at the heel of your life
waiting for the words to come.
i would steal the corners of your wisdom
peering through its occasionally
rosy windows.
you stood against
some ancient mess,
walked lightly. history
coursing through.
the best words (discreet after the years)
I could find for you
are " something is waking.
don't stumble"
waiting for the words to come.
i would steal the corners of your wisdom
peering through its occasionally
rosy windows.
you stood against
some ancient mess,
walked lightly. history
coursing through.
the best words (discreet after the years)
I could find for you
are " something is waking.
don't stumble"
— whitetea, May 12, 2008
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Marius Surleac
18 years 1 month ago
nice words...
whitetea
18 years 1 month ago
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themoonman
18 years 1 month ago
Hi whitetea...
Pleides
18 years 1 month ago
Sometimes you read
whitetea
18 years 1 month ago
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Kailashana
18 years 1 month ago
Hi whitetea, i like the
whitetea
18 years 1 month ago
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Esker
15 years 12 months ago
Overlook
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