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May 23, 2008
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Small Wingless Creatures
We come into this world small wingless creatures,
and someone washes us of our mother's blood,
we cry out
and open our lungs to breathe
and somehow a tiny fist is large enough
to hold fast a parent's heart,
strong enough to form loose bonds
that will tear apart mind and body,
wrest a spirit from a soul,
and life is lived
in the loam of earth
on the broken back of selfish dreams
a dreamer must awaken before
the mouth is frozen in silence
and the blood dries with the spittle
and the days are counted in stone.
and someone washes us of our mother's blood,
we cry out
and open our lungs to breathe
and somehow a tiny fist is large enough
to hold fast a parent's heart,
strong enough to form loose bonds
that will tear apart mind and body,
wrest a spirit from a soul,
and life is lived
in the loam of earth
on the broken back of selfish dreams
a dreamer must awaken before
the mouth is frozen in silence
and the blood dries with the spittle
and the days are counted in stone.
— Kailashana, May 23, 2008
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barbsdad2003
18 years ago
Masterful use ...
Kailashana
18 years ago
Hi Chuck, …And I
professor
18 years ago
and the days are counted in stone
Kailashana
18 years ago
Thanks Prof.. I’ve been
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