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May 29, 2008
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Humble Beginnings
Senryu:
Humble Beginnings
Chilly board houses
with holes and cracks in the walls
hearth blazing shadows
— Barbara Writes, May 29, 2008
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poewriter58
18 years ago
barbara
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
Just wanted to say hi
Barbara Writes
18 years ago
Hi Mark
Barbara Writes
18 years ago
Thanks Chrys
rider68
18 years ago
Very Good
Barbara Writes
18 years ago
Thanks Peter
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