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Jun 10, 2008
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Torture Of Death Waits
Tortured Death Waits
While waiting on death to swallow me up,
I see the sunset fading before my eyes,
The daylight turns to sudden darkness
and the skies roll away before my face.
As the mountains sink into the earth, I fell
into the riverbed, sinking deep in troubled waters
Oceans burst a global mist, rising high above the sky
then evaporating in heavenly realm.
As my journey nears its end,
Death waits
— Barbara Writes, Jun 10, 2008
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purplemoondoll
18 years ago
Wow - I loved this! You
Janice Pearce
18 years ago
Great Barb
Barbara Writes
18 years ago
Thanks
Synchro
18 years ago
Interesting that you see death as a cataclysmic adventure
Barbara Writes
18 years ago
Adventure hmmm
DarkinAZ
18 years ago
this is good,
Barbara Writes
18 years ago
thanks Mark
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