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Jun 23, 2008
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Velvet Flux
Velvet Flux
infused by your inspiration
reciprocal fluid elocution
of synchronized harmony
Waltzing to the music's heartbeat
we would drift and glide on laughter
dancing attendance on physical syntax
teaching our traumas to slumber
caught in the center of our universe
until touched by your migrant spirit
I neither lived nor breathed
existence within narrow boundaries
unimaginable loneliness defined me
you crossed my impenetrable barriers
transformed this apathy of being
rescued me from bitter soul-death
my stunted reality of quiescent cynicism
a spiritless and comatose creature
like a kiss of redemption to a condemned man
bewitched am I gladly compliant
by your grace I am exonerated
my incarnate miracle Electra
— Candlewitch, Jun 23, 2008
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professor
17 years 11 months ago
The waking of both body and soul
Candlewitch
17 years 11 months ago
Keith
poewriter58
17 years 11 months ago
Cat
Candlewitch
17 years 11 months ago
Glad you enjoyed it
rider68
17 years 11 months ago
Cat i thought you were Resting
Candlewitch
17 years 11 months ago
LOL
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
At first reading I took in
Candlewitch
17 years 11 months ago
Jess
weirdelf
17 years 11 months ago
At first reading I took in
infinite_dwarf
17 years 11 months ago
Cat!
Candlewitch
17 years 11 months ago
LOL!
barbsdad2003
17 years 11 months ago
It's so cotton-pickin' ...
Candlewitch
17 years 11 months ago
Chuck
orgami
17 years 11 months ago
swift like the beauty of midnight freights
Candlewitch
17 years 11 months ago
Orgami
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