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Jul 21, 2008
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some dreams
she was so lovely
he feared she would just vanish
then one day she did
some dreams come to life to prove
they are only dreams
he feared she would just vanish
then one day she did
some dreams come to life to prove
they are only dreams
— Rob Graber, Jul 21, 2008
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Barbara Writes
17 years 10 months ago
very intriguing
Rob Graber
17 years 10 months ago
Thanks!
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