Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

Roadside Fields

The roadside fields wear
periwinkle-blue asters
in August,
scientists say the explosion
of jellyfish indicates a sick sick ocean,
what an extraordinary creature!
what did you say was spineless?
I don't know who to vote for
any more the gap narrows,
tarnished angels
keep falling away from the truth,
Shhhhhhhhhhhh!
30 years ago I campaigned for
nuclear disarmanent
and now the only answer is
who will be the last one standing
with all the doomsday toys?
for all the good girls and boys

There is no truth to see unless one opens her
heart, there is no hope in Pandora's box,
there is nothing but the stench
of this bullshit belief

I see Queen Anne's Lace dancing in an
ocean of dreams
through these blurring eyes,
I, too, must lie.



— Kailashana, Aug 04, 2008

Critiques

R

Rolwright

17 years 10 months ago

No you don't

You must not lie Cause then you will be no better then those who lie all the time.People tell lies because they don't wan't to be truthful with themselves.You are too beautiful to need something to hide behind.Don't lie cause if you need someone to hide behind ; Let it be Me Rolwright your Knight in shining armor I'll be your Karma Maybe even your Sutra Forget that book we will invent our own When I read your poems I feel like I'm no longer alone I can't be wrong for loving you cause I'm Rolw right I can see thru the darkness cause you and only you L I G H T U P M Y L I F E PEACE AND LOVE FROM YOUR FAVORITE RAP ARTIST ROLWRIGHT
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

Rohlwright….and don’t

Rohlwright....and don't ever scare me like that again even if i know the kids are all right and don't need no fucking edumacation just like the Floyd sang, it's all lies... we say play fair, and the world doesn't, never did we say go to school and then sling hamburgers with your degrees when the white collar *smart* jobs are sent overseas we say that you'll live is happy ever after if you find the *right* partner (always defined by parental standards -- didn't we hate our parents for doing that did we sometimes relate just in spite?) and don't we just love every designer pill in our medicine bag (and keeps us out of our dark dark closet). we say do what we we say and forget that imitation of life is the gold standard by which children learn. so forgive me if I lie cause i don't beLIEve in anything but Love, and if it costs everything, so be it. ~A.

Join Neopoet to leave a critique

Neopoet is a free community of poets who critique and support each other's writing.