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Behind the Blue ~ Bukowski's Bluebird

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Bluebird

there's a bluebird in my heart that
wants to get out
but I'm too tough for him,
I say, stay in there, I'm not going
to let anybody see
you.

there's a bluebird in my heart that
wants to get out
but I pur whiskey on him and inhale
cigarette smoke
and the whores and the bartenders
and the grocery clerks
never know that
he's
in there.

there's a bluebird in my heart that
wants to get out
but I'm too tough for him,
I say,
stay down, do you want to mess
me up?
you want to screw up the
works?
you want to blow my book sales in
Europe?

there's a bluebird in my heart that
wants to get out
but I'm too clever, I only let him out
at night sometimes
when everybody's asleep.
I say, I know that you're there,
so don't be
sad.
then I put him back,
but he's singing a little
in there, I haven't quite let him
die
and we sleep together like
that
with our
secret pact
and it's nice enough to
make a man
weep, but I don't
weep, do
you?

- Charles Bukowski

 

 

Behind the Blue

 

Locked inside the prison
of our own volition
is a gathering storm
there is no safe harbor
from the torment of the sea,
from all that blue
encased in a heart of glass

Bukowski you shall weep
poetry
for all men,
and I like the siren, shall call you
forth, angelic wings
unfolding,

weeping and weeping.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


— Kailashana, Aug 13, 2008

Critiques

R

Rolwright

17 years 10 months ago

Sorry

I've been missing but it's been for a better reason so just stay true and you will see who sooner then you expect so just relax please.I got you
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

Hi R. See. What you’ve

Hi R. See. What you've done? You ain't around for a few days and I worry about you! You call me 3 times in one day and I worry about me. LOL. Fucking life... we're always caught between a rock and a hard place. And sometimes, every once in a while, we get a perfect day or a perfect moment. Eh? Love ya. ~A
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 10 months ago

Anna...

bluebird is one of my favorite poems by Bukowski ... I was inspired by his honesty... I liked your poem too Anna... thanks for posting this one.... Richard
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 10 months ago

Hi moon-man, that’s why I

Hi moon-man, that's why I adore Bukowski and Rumi. Both are brutally honest, totally comfortable in their own skins.. One is sacred in his profanity; the other is profanely sacred. Depending on who's reading who(m) ;-) ~A
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Mum

Thanks for sharing your love and yourself again ... you leave your heart on the page ... love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x x

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