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Aug 19, 2008
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Saying Goodbye
Saying Goodbye
Quietly she walks
holding back a flood of tears
they all sense her pain
empty stares behind their eyes
as she lay her child to rest
— Barbara Writes, Aug 19, 2008
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Critiques
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
touching write...
easylife_2
17 years 9 months ago
very touching
Barbara Writes
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you both
zarul
17 years 9 months ago
agree with easylife
Janice Pearce
17 years 9 months ago
Saying Goodbye
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Barbara
Barbara Writes
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks mark,easy,zarul,janice and linda
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