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Thor's Gift To A Child
If I were a child,
I would be free to discover
my inner Pokemon
alas, I’m too old for new landscapes
to recognize,
besides
all I have at my disposal are these marching
soldiers of time,
hup one two three, hup, one two three!
drill sergeants biting the dust in an ever-expanding desert, carrying
a full metal jacket —
100 pounds of
vicissitudes and fortitudes
regiments in boxed-up metaphors
I learned at the feet of history,
catacombs
and honeycombs sometimes lost,
sometimes melting in the womb of love,
or in the nightmare of its denial.
Gabriel, come blow your horn!
Break down
these walls of isolation and return me to the time
of orange blossoms when knighthood was in flower
and I, a princess banished to the dark tower by
three wicked Norsemen like the Kings of the Orient
each bearing the thunder of Thor
and the sweet song of a siren
must learn to cross my own river of fire.
Critiques
rider68
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Anna
Kailashana
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Peter, my dear friend.
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
Thor is a warrior,
Kailashana
17 years 9 months ago
You’re wayyyyyyyyyyyyy too
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
yikes! all in one?
themoonman
17 years 9 months ago
Hi Anna...
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
Anna
Kailashana
17 years 9 months ago
Linda, perhaps it is an
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