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Sep 18, 2008
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Rupture
Cascading down wire
I reach the pool
Filled with dripping water - and reflections of the past.
Each drop a different story of my life
A different chapter.
Of things I'd just as soon forget
My first real boyfriend.
He went off to defend our country.
I've not heard from him since.
A different drop now.
The fighting within the household
Growing up.
My first real job.
Seeing things no 17 year old should.
Such as a dead child.
The newest drop
Is that of heartache.
Of a desert love gone wrong
I set the timer
And shimmer back up
To the ledge
Detonation
Water spreads everywhere.
As I just walk away silently....
I reach the pool
Filled with dripping water - and reflections of the past.
Each drop a different story of my life
A different chapter.
Of things I'd just as soon forget
My first real boyfriend.
He went off to defend our country.
I've not heard from him since.
A different drop now.
The fighting within the household
Growing up.
My first real job.
Seeing things no 17 year old should.
Such as a dead child.
The newest drop
Is that of heartache.
Of a desert love gone wrong
I set the timer
And shimmer back up
To the ledge
Detonation
Water spreads everywhere.
As I just walk away silently....
— infinite_dwarf, Sep 18, 2008
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Critiques
Linda Moses
17 years 8 months ago
Jess
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
very good
prayersbyPatty
17 years 8 months ago
Jess
themoonman
17 years 8 months ago
Detonation...
orgami
17 years 8 months ago
Water memories
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Thanks, everyone!
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