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:"Remarkable"

I've always loved this word,
"remarkable",
don't you?
it speaks
so well of itself
and like anything
we can speak of,
we are left
with the silence
in-between the words.

But if you should see
what is the most remarkable
thing of all,
you'll know it's a foregone
conclusion that the person
saying *remarkable*
has nothing else to say.


— Kailashana, Sep 19, 2008

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rider68

17 years 8 months ago

Conundrum

I came and read....left a thought.....looked back and all had vanished, "Remarkable" Yes again i also love this word, It's remarkable that you have turned it into poetry, Quite Remarkable, hehe...... As always....peter ~~~"I am not afraid of tomorrow, for I have seen yesterday, and I love today."~~~
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 8 months ago

hehehe yourself Peter, if

hehehe yourself Peter, if you'd stop all that thinking and leaving thoughts around!!!! lol.A couple of years ago, I wrote a poem about a woman's name. I can't remember it just now, but when and if I do, I'll make sure I remember it again.. Hugs. A.
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gumpymonkey

17 years 8 months ago

You

You successfully murdered the word remarkable. It is dead to me now. Eras of art are dead the moment they are labeled. Words are dead the moment they are personified. I hope you are proud of yourself. :) But you get an A+ for intellectual effort. -Daniel
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 8 months ago

Shit. I never thought I’d

Shit. I never thought I'd be vilified for being personified. But then again I don't know the answer to the question: "Who knew?". (And the plusses and minuses of letters have always left certain reservations of hesitation.) Thanks Daniel, I like your eyelashes. ;-) ~A
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 8 months ago

Remarkable

Thought provoking words here Anna~ Nicely written! "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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