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Oct 14, 2008
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A Way of Life
A Way of Life
The country is bankrupt
Due to greed and corruption
Bankers sit on credit
As my retirement goes up in smoke
And my 401k becomes 001k.
The economy slowly collapses
Jobs are lost and pensions disappear
Swindlers get golden parachutes
Poor get the shaft
As the nation continues to fall.
Pass the buck shift the blame
Blame the poor working class
The wealthy live in prosperity
The middle class lose their homes
While huge bailouts go to the rich
Demise is before me
As cutbacks are taking shape
And payouts lined pockets
Man controls man to his injury
As the world we know plummets
— Barbara Writes, Oct 14, 2008
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whitetea
17 years 8 months ago
amen
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
Thanks Whitetea
barbsdad2003
17 years 8 months ago
Government ...
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
Chuck
weirdelf
17 years 8 months ago
You deny you own power, Barbara,
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
The Power
purplemoondoll
17 years 8 months ago
An accurate commentary on
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
Thanks Kaz
Kailashana
17 years 8 months ago
Sadly, my mother was right
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
Middle Class
Janice Pearce
17 years 8 months ago
Barbara
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 8 months ago
Barbara,
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
Thanks Eddie
weirdelf
17 years 8 months ago
You got the oomph.
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
Thanks Jess
infinite_dwarf
17 years 8 months ago
Barbara
Barbara Writes
17 years 8 months ago
Thanks Jess K
zarul
17 years 8 months ago
A Way of Life
prayersbyPatty
17 years 7 months ago
This is more of a debate than a poem here's my 2 cents
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Right you are Patty
Nature Mithya
17 years 7 months ago
Rett, I believe you have the best thoughts in the matter.
prayersbyPatty
17 years 7 months ago
Thats what I lost folks
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
Hi Barbara...
Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
Richard
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
am with you, patty my love
Janice Pearce
17 years 7 months ago
Cheers Patty!! And Barbara!!
Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
Janice
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Barbara
Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
Rett
Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
Patty
prayersbyPatty
17 years 7 months ago
Jess my love
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
and there you go...
Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
Richard
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