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Oct 15, 2008
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hands off
BF Skinner is asking
what motivated his death.
His birth,
or why his little mother wore the ring.
career minded, warm blooded-
woman, you are
unaware of the home
you are in, the people put their
plates down on that morning table
concentrating on the roundness.
a perfect simplicity
you have not spoken with.
what motivated his death.
His birth,
or why his little mother wore the ring.
career minded, warm blooded-
woman, you are
unaware of the home
you are in, the people put their
plates down on that morning table
concentrating on the roundness.
a perfect simplicity
you have not spoken with.
— whitetea, Oct 15, 2008
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Arrow
17 years 8 months ago
I'm very curious to see where you go with this
barbsdad2003
17 years 8 months ago
Wow!
orgami
17 years 7 months ago
social tolerance
whitetea
17 years ago
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