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If Love had Never Been

Imagine, if you will
a world that's void of "Hope".
can you fathom the continuous struggle
by being at the end of your rope?

And "Joy" would surely disappear
with smiles falling from every face;
unhappiness, and bitter doubt,
as a "shroud-like, sort of lace".

And throughout all of our endeavors,
discouragement would prevail;
leaving us with labored breathing,
stealing the wind out of our sail.

The negative emotions
slowly hardening each heart,
would also be the poison
tearing families, apart.

There'd be no good intentions,
no-one would know who was a friend;
we'd live a life of misery,
if "Love" had never been.
— docmaverick, Oct 15, 2008

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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yenti

yenti

17 years 8 months ago

Love

Very good piece about the Love side, I always have a problem with Hope as I think it is a negative thought to have. Can you imagine when pandoras box was empty, except that Hope was left there, only people that sit back and wait, are in a hope state. Maybe a more posative thing like Love would have been better to be the last thing in there, as it is a love of all things or just one thing that will get you through as you will strive to be there with it. (Just a thought) I don't see the need for AND at the start of your third Stanza or what ever they call verses here. LOL Yours Ian.T
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 8 months ago

Love and Hope

Very nice poem Patty
AW

Antoinette Mar…

17 years 8 months ago

Love

I read and re-read this poem, sort of etching it on to my soul...a beautiful piece Thanks Doc
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Antoinette Mar…

17 years 8 months ago

Love

I read and re-read this poem, sort of etching it on to my soul...a beautiful piece Thanks Doc
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 7 months ago

Doc

Ahh yes, hope, joy, and love. Your description of life without these, is spot-on. "There's no trick to being a humorist when you have the whole government working for you." Will Rogers

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