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Oct 26, 2008
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Look to Heaven
Litle girl, look to heaven
Dreams of love could welcome you back
your eyes will be met
Ask nothing and hear everything
Fall into love again
Little girl, look to heaven
Forget everything I ever told you
Erase every page of me
Your eyes will be met
Why did you let me become,
The things I am today?
Little girl, look to heaven
And i was so wrong, to ever assume
You could ever love me again
Your eyes will be met
Let me forgive you
Let me forget you
Little girl, look to heaven
Your eyes will be met
Dreams of love could welcome you back
your eyes will be met
Ask nothing and hear everything
Fall into love again
Little girl, look to heaven
Forget everything I ever told you
Erase every page of me
Your eyes will be met
Why did you let me become,
The things I am today?
Little girl, look to heaven
And i was so wrong, to ever assume
You could ever love me again
Your eyes will be met
Let me forgive you
Let me forget you
Little girl, look to heaven
Your eyes will be met
— washing tears, Oct 26, 2008
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prayersbyPatty
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