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Nov 07, 2008
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Morning Whispers
This fine early morning
I hear the day whisper unto me,
reminding me to be sensible
and careful, so as to remain free.
For freedom is a privilege
and I'm reminded that each night,
as I lay down safely in my bed
I understand it's not a right.
Each morning when I wake up safe
I'm urged towards thankfulness,
and I wonder what I ever did
to deserve to be so blessed.
I gain no added troubles
or worries as I sleep,
and when the morning nudges me awake
all my blessings are mine to keep.
So with whom do I share my gratitude?
For there's so much I'm grateful of;
and considering their abundance
I have to thank God, up above.
I mean not to offend anyone
by mentioning the existence of God,
but I can't thank merely circumstance,
there's someone higher up, I must applaud.
I hear the day whisper again
full voice, inside my ear;
urging me to greet the day
and God's love, that's so very clear.
I hear the day whisper unto me,
reminding me to be sensible
and careful, so as to remain free.
For freedom is a privilege
and I'm reminded that each night,
as I lay down safely in my bed
I understand it's not a right.
Each morning when I wake up safe
I'm urged towards thankfulness,
and I wonder what I ever did
to deserve to be so blessed.
I gain no added troubles
or worries as I sleep,
and when the morning nudges me awake
all my blessings are mine to keep.
So with whom do I share my gratitude?
For there's so much I'm grateful of;
and considering their abundance
I have to thank God, up above.
I mean not to offend anyone
by mentioning the existence of God,
but I can't thank merely circumstance,
there's someone higher up, I must applaud.
I hear the day whisper again
full voice, inside my ear;
urging me to greet the day
and God's love, that's so very clear.
— docmaverick, Nov 07, 2008
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Janice Pearce
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Morning Whispers
themoonman
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Barbara Writes
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Morning Whispers
docmaverick
17 years 7 months ago
I am relieved...
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